Little_Miss_Psycho

@CreepilyLovely  your welcome

Practicing* 

@KawaiiKillerKagura
            From what I've read, I can say that your story line is good in my opinion. You have a lot of run on sentences though.
             
            The only advice I have for you is to practice because practiceling will always help you improve. 
            
            Sorry if I wasn't much help, but I'm not usually the type of person that gives advice.

@KawaiiKillerKagura 
            I'll read one whenever I have the time for it and let you know what I think. Why do you want my advice though?

@CreepilyLovely thanks for your advice after all I'm still a kid so I'm still learning