ThatFandomGirl141
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I love, love, love, the beginning of the story! Excellent starting points, love how you started your introduction to your characters and how you have the lay out concept going forward to reveal some real potential for future story plot points. So fucking proud of you kiddo!
KawaiiPotat00
Well thank you :)love you Kaya I feel like I'm going somewhere with this, not only with my independent story but for future things.