@GallantZero Thank you so much for the follow, I really appreciate it! I don't really do follow backs, though, Sorry. I did give your book a read and I really like the idea of it, I am OBSESSED with medieval type universes. I thought the format you used was interesting, but I feel it went well with your approach. A bit of advice, though, try to spice up your vocab and maybe draw out some of your sentences more. For example, when you're describing something magnificent use deeper, more complex adjectives to create a strong mental image for your readers. Use words and phrases that will appeal to the five senses. Thank you again for the suggestion and the follow!