Hii! Ngayon ko lang po natapos basahin yung story mo na Serenity Breaker. For critique po, maganda po yung story mo tas ramdam mo yung bawat character, yung pagkakaiba iba nila pero ang tamlay tignan, maybe bold letters might help.
Medyo nalilito lang ako kung yung character na ba yung nagsasalita or narration parin.
Antayin ko po yung next chapters kasi nagustuhan ko po yung story mo.
Keep writing!
Thankyouuu