Ashe_Hime

Thank you for checking out "Facade" a Light Yagami love story. It's still early in the works but I'm so excited to work on it. And I appreciate any feedback. :)

Ashe_Hime

@Ashe_Hime oh no your perfectly fine. There will be minor updates but not too much. Jun is full of surprises and is alot more than she appears. I hope you continue to enjoy the story :) please feel free to leave anymore feedback on it. 
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Kazablob

@Ashe_Hime I think it's awesome so far, but I practically heard a record scratch when it was mentioned that she had a touchscreen phone, I wonder how much the more modern setting will effect the story if at all, I also wonder how she's paying for the website, if she's paying for it with her mother's money then maybe that could factor into the story some how, if it's HER money then maybe she has a job and 1 more escape from her mother. Sorry for rambling I just really like it so far
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ZuitheRedfox

Thank you a lot for the follow, it means a lot to me! If you plan on reading any of my stuff, remember that feedback is always welcome, so speak up your mind if you're unsatisfied with anything! Much love from Brazil, amigo.

Kazablob

@ZuitheRedfox Your welcome, I will definitely get to reading some of your stories along with posting feedback.
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DYoongiT

Thank you for all the comments on my story, they really made my day! 

DYoongiT

Awe good that makes me happy 
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Kazablob

@DYoongiT you're welcome, I ended up really enjoying it. :)
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NoelN50

Can you read my book I’m done whit chapter 1

Kazablob

@NoelN50 hey, I just read it and I thought it was really good, there are some spelling errors but that can't be helped
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Kazablob

@NoelN50 worry about it, I'll give it a read
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