KazumiSaki122

Hello everyone, I am back from my hiatus, with a new story, check out "A Titan in a Rose Field".

corkykong

https://www.wattpad.com/story/276818765?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=corkykong&wp_originator=a8LLyE5gQEoWOW%2Fydm1y1X0VqJn8o%2F99T2wkbeygHhAkq3VK7HOiWHSbVkHcD%2F8i0LNVcaanxqgpoUQIOydFzKbLKn9%2FxZyk8pzcOKd3mfCi5dnS5IFgPYDq8BGDeR7k
          
          Pst... Hey! You there... Eh, I don't really care. Though I made a story similar to yours. 
          
          It's a titan inside of the RWBY fiction, but with a twist... Your guardian (Tank) is taken, and slowly becomes part Grimm as well. I personally think that the story is going well, but I though that I should run the story by another Destiny x RWBY writer... Or Destiny writer in general

corkykong

@corkykong nice! Thanks for the input. Oh, I did forget to mention that Tank (due to his connection to darkness). Instead of taking wills like Oryx; you have the ability to take trauma and pain away. So you end up having a few Grimm buddies that you cleansed.
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KazumiSaki122

@corkykong Overall it's pretty good from what I read, granted I did jump around, and back and forth a few times just to get ideas of it. I can't lie I've personally always loved the Taken Guardian concept so I thought that was pretty cool, overall I enjoyed your story. I'd have to read in depth a little more for more feedback but right now it's only positive. Keep up the good work guardian.
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Tristen6534

Hey Kazumi great ending for your Titan in a rose field book can’t wait till the sequel comes out for it and with the time placement of during close to beyond light. Can’t wait till we see how the house of salvation makes it to Remnant if that’s what u we’re going for, but anywho keep up the amazing work man. The only thing I say try to do a lil better is the spacing in your reading other than that great work.

KazumiSaki122

@Tristen6534 Thank you for the kind words, yeah I was looking back through and I even think I could do a better job with my spacing haha. As for House of Salvation they may get a little cameo here but if you want a real look read the Epilogue of   "Titan In a Rose Field" if you haven't already it gives a better look into what is to come.
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Sundew112604

Hey! You good?

Sundew112604

@Destro_Enforcer Ah I see, good luck
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Destro_Enforcer

I’m trying to beat Vault of Glass right now so... yeah.
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Destro_Enforcer

No I’m not.
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Sundew112604

"Whether we wanted it or not, we've stepped into a war with the Cabal on Mars. So let's get to taking out their command, one by one. Valus Ta'aurc. From what I can gather he commands the Siege Dancers from an Imperial Land Tank outside of Rubicon. He's well protected, but with the right team, we can punch through those defenses, take this beast out, and break their grip on Freehold."
          — Commander Zavala

Sundew112604

That’s funny and all but Whether we wanted it or not, we've stepped into a war with the Cabal on Mars. So let's get to taking out their command, one by one. Valus Ta'aurc. From what I can gather he commands the Siege Dancers from an Imperial Land Tank outside of Rubicon. He's well protected, but with the right team, we can punch through those defenses, take this beast out, and break their grip on Freehold.
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KazumiSaki122

@Sundew112604  oh my god it's happening! I trained for this! I just have to hide behind the stairs and crates!
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