Milo Giannis

Hi thnx for the follow contact me if your willing to do a read for read or comment for comment thanks again hope u have a good rest of your day 

I forgot to follow you when I left your book......oops. But all is well now :)

I just did this one. Idk if you guys will like it, but please read. Criticism is good when it comes to writing.
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/105042975

Well, first chapter. Not bad but I want reviews and tips and such. So please read. And kill me later.
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/93181358

To those that think they are hated, you are. But not by me. By some duch in an alleyway, someone at work or school. But there are twice as much that care about you. That love you. Stay safe and know there are two parts of everything.

Good story. Kinda confused on who is who such as is kye or star the one who likes rules. The narration is off and a few first/third person P.O.V. issues. I think star is the rules follower. I like how the scene where kye cries is so sad it actually broke my heart. Anyway: i don't know if wattpad has a way to write to each other for i am new here and found ur story but i will gladly give u writing tips so the fans could find out what happens. BTW anouther account is claiming this story as there own. I know this is Your story.