specsforeyes
Hey, dear author! Howdy. I'm the owner of the Aizawa YouTube channel. I like your work, and I would like to share it with my audience with credit to your work. so that your work will reach a wider audience.
Aizawa
harrisonwellsfan999
are you gonna continue the kiaoken story?
Kconroy21
@harrisonwellsfan999 yeah I'm just on a work trip at the moment sorry I'll be back end of aug
harrisonwellsfan999
BTW this is the face Deku should have when getting serious. The one Gohan has, not Cell https://www.youtube.com/shorts/X3XeDjB_7TU
harrisonwellsfan999
TheRichtofen115
ya know after reading through your Jedi Izuku story yeah it's rough around the edges but at least your consistent could use a rework
TheRichtofen115
@Kconroy21 ya know I threw my hat into that sort of thing just recently because I felt inspired for one...that and i've been playing a hell of a lot of BattleFront 2 on my PS5 since it got a resurgence in player base although if you want some Ideas I like how you made Izuku more like Ob-Wan and Anakin though I kinda don't like how you handled momo tbh a bit too OOC Oooh speaking of...I always imagined momo with a curved hilt...considering she comes from a rich family and she probably took fencing lessons Makashi is perfect for her anyway I'd say keep her as she is in canon while simultaneously give her more interactions with Izuku as for Kirishima...I liked the idea...but a part of me can't let go of how OFA is a quntessential piece of Izuku's character just give him float and stockpile and leave the rest of the quirks
harrisonwellsfan999
harrisonwellsfan999
hey recommendation, maybe do have UI in your story. Personally I hated DBS, DBZ was much better, much less plot holes and it felt more grounded. When you go to basically destroying the universe levels, it gets ridiculous. So maybe don't have Izuku in your story learn Ultra Instinct. Or ego or beast, just leave it at Kaioken, as that seems like an appropriate thing for a human. Just have him learn moves like kamahamaha, spirit bomb, instant transmission, and solar flair.
TheRichtofen115
hello there...just wanted to say I love the force within and Izuku having a crossguard lightsaber was a neat touch I feel like Crossguards are symbolic of crusaders also Momo being Tsundere is kinda out of character but hilarious anyway I can't wait for the next chapter...which has been months since the last hehe
TheRichtofen115
@Kconroy21 no prob just don't doubt yourself you got a good foundation with your story
TheRichtofen115
@Kconroy21 sorry for the spam but my best advice keep doing what you were doing with Izuku also keep the sakura garden i'm fine with character death as long as it isn't some of the major cast ya know cause if a major character dies everything is thrown off balance I could help you if you want...although its YOUR work you get the final say
NeehaShaikh9
Don't worry, just gathering readers!