specsforeyes

Hey, dear author! Howdy. I'm the owner of the Aizawa YouTube channel. I like your work, and I would like to share it with my audience with credit to your work. so that your work will reach a wider audience.
          
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specsforeyes

@Kconroy21 thank you for permission, and sure
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Kconroy21

@specsforeyes go for it, just send me a link so I can see it too :)
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TheRichtofen115

ya know after reading through your Jedi Izuku story yeah it's rough around the edges but at least your consistent could use a rework

TheRichtofen115

@Kconroy21 other than that keep the rest relatively the same
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Kconroy21

@TheRichtofen115 good ideas bro lemme think
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TheRichtofen115

@Kconroy21 ya know I threw my hat into that sort of thing just recently because I felt inspired for one...that and i've been playing a hell of a lot of BattleFront 2 on my PS5 since it got a resurgence in player base although if you want some Ideas I like how you made Izuku more like Ob-Wan and Anakin though I kinda don't like how you handled momo tbh a bit too OOC Oooh speaking of...I always imagined momo with a curved hilt...considering she comes from a rich family and she probably took fencing lessons Makashi is perfect for her anyway I'd say keep her as she is in canon while simultaneously give her more interactions with Izuku as for Kirishima...I liked the idea...but a part of me can't let go of how OFA is a quntessential piece of Izuku's character just give him float and stockpile and leave the rest of the quirks
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harrisonwellsfan999

hey recommendation, maybe do have UI in your story. Personally I hated DBS, DBZ was much better, much less plot holes and it felt more grounded. When you go to basically destroying the universe levels, it gets ridiculous. So maybe don't have Izuku in your story learn Ultra Instinct. Or ego or beast, just leave it at Kaioken, as that seems like an appropriate thing for a human. Just have him learn moves like kamahamaha, spirit bomb, instant transmission, and solar flair.

TheRichtofen115

hello there...just wanted to say I love the force within and Izuku having a crossguard lightsaber was a neat touch I feel like Crossguards are symbolic of crusaders also Momo being Tsundere is kinda out of character but hilarious anyway I can't wait for the next chapter...which has been months since the last hehe

TheRichtofen115

@Kconroy21 no prob just don't doubt yourself you got a good foundation with your story
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TheRichtofen115

@Kconroy21 sorry for the spam but my best advice keep doing what you were doing with Izuku also keep the sakura garden i'm fine with character death as long as it isn't some of the major cast ya know cause if a major character dies everything is thrown off balance I could help you if you want...although its YOUR work you get the final say
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