Heyy author I am currently reading your book. Still in chapter 5, I want to point out something that I felt. I feel like at the beginning the story is only focusing on noah and reggie. And the other 2 boys felt like a side character. Although I understand it's the starting of the book, but I would love a lot more deeper connection with the other 2 as well. As it's a reverse harem, I expect kinda equal amount of focus on all the characters. I can understand if the connection gets better later, but at the beginning a lot more focus on Joshua and mal with reggie would be amazing.
P.S- It's just my opinion. I hope you don't mind. It's just that I read a lot of reverse harem books, so kinda have some idea about it.
