@IamOPAL Okay, well I re-read my story and I have no idea how to further it to be how I want it to be. I also have no interest in it any longer. I have some short stories that may interest you but I think that I will end the story. If you want me to make another chapter for one of my short stories, I could possibly do that, since they are more recent and I actually know how to create a proper story. Just let me know if you would.