I hear you, it IS discouraging - especially when you see other stories that are, frankly, quite poorly written, doing so well. But you can't let that get to you, I believe that I, as well as you, will find an audience, and get some feedback. If you enjoy writing, then keep writing, regardless. And promote it! That helps, though you probably have more reads than me, so I'd guess you'd know, hehe. I've been very busy writing myself, but I will read the rest of your story later this morning. I'm not one of those blazing fast readers, so I don't get in a whole lot often. I take my time and savor each word! In short: Keep going!