paper_soul28
Hey I really love your book so far! You'd deserve so much more reads. I admire your ability to write so poetic
paper_soul28
@ KeepItSimpleStupid Yes! We're all so overstimulated that we unlearned to focus at one thing at a time.
KeepItSimpleStupid
@paper_soul28 I completely get that. The story starts off kinda slowly for a reason. I don't like the constant action that you often see in media. Because it doesn't allow characters the room to breathe. In a more mundane setting, it allows you to understand the smaller actions of the characters more.
paper_soul28
@ paper_soul28 I understand what you mean. I really appreciate stories that go beyond the surface. The art of slowing down things and giving characters the chance to breath is beautiful in my eyes :) Hope that makes any sense