So I'm working on something new, yet I feel still true to the style you all seem to enjoy from me! I'm not ready to publish the complete first chapter but I'm posting the first 2 paragraphs below for you to read! I would love if you could read and give your opinion guys please
"It was a chilly autumn evening and the sun was setting over the land as a young male walked up the path towards the tall gothic castle that loomed up high amongst the overgrown woodland which curled around it almost forming a completely protective barrier. The only accessible way up to the castle which had been abandoned centuries ago was along the wide driveway which was overgrown with flora and thick grass. I stood at the window of my bedroom in one of the castle's tall spires looking down the driveway with my hand pressed up against the cold windowpane watching a male approaching, knowing that he could not see me as I watched him I sighed softly to myself stepping back into the dark shadows which filled the room.
Moving towards the door of the room I closed my eyes allowing myself to slip through the door remembering the times I had to open the door when I could be seen and heard by those around me. A time when I was more than a spirit stuck in a castle..... waiting for someone to see me, to trust me so that I could be freed from this ethereal form and rejoin the world. But how could one gain the trust of someone who could not see or even hear you? That was the difficult part of my situation. As I reached the once grand entrance way, which now lay dark and covered in dust and cobwebs, the male who had been approaching up the driveway pushed open one of the grand oak doors which formed the entranceway into the castle. The creek of the old door echoing around the vast empty space eerily, reinforcing the abandoned eerie feeling which clung to my home like the curse that it was."