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Can You Please Go Check Out My Story , Serendipity. I'll Greatly Appreciate The Help
KeiaaSOc
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I'll check out your book if you check mine..?
KeiaaSOc
ok thanks and for now can you tell others about my book
YasmineCooper
Great! Remember one chapter at a time and use some cliffhangers that way the reader can't wait to get the next chapter. You're a good writer and people should see that.
KeiaaSOc
ok thanks a lot I'll do it on the update and see how it turn out. @yasminecooper
KeiaaSOc
KeiaaSOc
change it to what and ok I understand
YasmineCooper
@KeiaaSOc I went through your material and you have a good plot going, but it's confusing on the character interaction. There are too many characters and the reader can be overwhelmed. With the five sisters narrow it down to 2-3 main characters and the others minor characters. Write a picture of what is going on. Like when Dre was cheating. How did Coco feel? when she seen him with the girl. When the characters are speaking use the format: "blah blah blah." asked Maya "blah blah blah." replied Mimi Other than that I think you got a masterpiece on your hands.
YasmineCooper
I would say don't let your book updates lapse. Uploading a chapter 2-3 times a week. Please don't take this the wrong way but how do you feel about changing the format of your book?
KeiaaSOc
thanks and yes am trying get ppl to read my book and tel me what they think @yasmineCooper
YasmineCooper
Thanks for the follow! let me know if need any help with your material or getting more reads.