Keindurkun

Expect something.... new.

SlyNudel

If you need any editors you can msg me. Your stories are pretty good but small things can be worked. Like more character development and story progression. But other than that it's top notch. 
          I will need to do a more in depth review before I can start finding some bigger thing that would be an issue. But after a quick skimming through it. It's pretty good. 
          Other than that if you need me msg me. I can give ya a hand. And plus you might know me. 

SlyNudel

@Keindurkun hehe yes the nudel appears. 
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