Keiraboo401
HAPPY NEW YEARS EVERYONE!!!
Keiraboo401
Keiraboo401
Happy Holidays!!
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Takashiu
I will say this again seeing the situation escalade I believe she can save Jiraiya because lots to be honest she can tell him the whole truth and make him feel miserable out of it and then he has to walk to the Leaf Village knowing the truth that his two students want revenge against the leaf for the actions of Danzo hey guys let's be honest it's his fault and his actions have made situations worse than better Will it really dramatically change the situation for the village knowing that the rain village wants blood thanks to Danzo major actions and has created the Akatsuki because of it no one will blame them and she's going to tell him the whole entire truth because let's be honest he needs to hear this and sit down to hear what she has to say and about Itachi Mr toad sage you're about to be miserable for a bit and guilty of failing your students and failing the village not realizing the third did this
Keiraboo401
Ok People! I have been awhile and I love you all and I’m so sorry!! I am writing again to expect a new chapter soon!
Takashiu
@Keiraboo401 thank you And I just read your chapter I want her to change the script finally I think she finally wants something for herself because let's be honest she's been following the story too much and her doing this finding a way to save him or bring him back fits her character so well because she's done playing this game with God She wants to live a full life with the people she truly cares about and Itachi needs to be known as a hero to live so she better get him recognized and they're done being used as tools for the village And they both should be recognized as victims of it!!
Takashiu
Rereading this again and again I will say this you really made a good scientist and someone who doesn't give up easily she has the personality and I'm think we can easily tell she's done playing by their rules the world and everyone who's been abusing her so even though she thinks she is not going to lay down except Itachi's fate she's very gifted hell I would say she's on kakashi's level in a fight now her own skills will her own training her own abilities show it it's just that she doesn't believe in it That's saddens me she tried to go merciful on Roots That's why she was losing she was always on the defensive to not show that she's not the killer or the aggressor in that fight and Danzo knew it but I'm glad you build herself up and Itachi just made the biggest mistake and thinking that she's going to let him kick the bucket after he dies and gets bring back to life because she's going to put him back together she has the powers the abilities and the Uzumaki gift because let's all be honest a jutsu like her is can bring back the dead to their full strength that is the Uzumaki's ability and it's the strong one too so you really piqued my interest because the journey she was on trained her to be stronger and tougher and the more resilient of dying and I think Kisame loves that about her and respects it she's like an annoying little sister to him that he gets to see or how old is he is a an uncle paying a visit to a niece
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Keiraboo401
Soon, also your getting an Itachi pov chapter
Takashiu
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@Keiraboo401 yeah he should be worried about his situation when he get resurrected jutsu and then out of spite this chick I think it's kind of scary and kind of cute when you think about it when I look at this situation I watch back to the old anime of dragon Ball z your character reminds me of Bulma except she's she is smarter and she is strong I actually labeled her Kakashi label of threat she needs to be respectable of herself because God damn that kid can survive all of this shit and has the lack of confidence of her own abilities because personally she earned her title of being a top-tier Shinobi
Keiraboo401
No chapters today, sorry! But I will get you one in the next few days!
Takashiu
I got to say Keiraboo you are evil in a good way and I like your OC she is not just going to let this slide she is going they put all the weight into it Sasuke is going to be scared of her because what you just wrote down and I just read it made me cry really did but I realized three things about your character she's a mad scientist but a moral one who deeply cares about people she has colleagues people that care about her And she has Uzumaki chakra in her That's what's more scary about her Orochimaru hasn't studied her if I read your subplot right involving her going to the unknown Village and realizing the most greatest Shinobi of the generation of the Uzumaki was still alive and gifted her for him to finally die Knowing how much Chakra he had what you wrote down and I had to reread and think what she's going to do to keep Itachi alive I realize many things she is not a quitter or the one who goes in silently into the night she's full into this to make Sasuke and Itachi Happy and her happy because she's done being miserable and him being miserable so you really kicked my ass and I'm sorry I keep writing in your thing because I don't want to make a large post in your story because it just feels wrong And you really do slap me in the face with this and makes me improve my stories too because I'm actually using you as a study basis because we know Itachi pretty well He won't allow anyone to save him
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@Keiraboo401 but I think what I like about her is she's not the quiet one who lets things slide she is petty as fuck and her loving Itachi pretty much shows it she is not allowing this to slide knowing how much he suffered by him and by the village she is going to make that idiot a hero if he likes it or not and living one too because he wants himself to be a villain but I think the village needs a reality check they're the ones who made the Uchiha want to rebel or the ones who got away from the village leave the village and hate it or want to survive she is one of those survivors there's a saying you can kill an entire people but you can't expect them to all go extinct they'll be people with abilities like the Uchihas still existing or having it in another continent and pretty much her being the tragic hero who had to suffer by so many people's hands And by its own village and she was not even a Shinobi and that saying something she is more gifted I would actually say he's strong then Kakashi Yes even to this season of Naruto she has the skills she survived and learned and right now she has the will to survive and willing to punchy tachi in the face for dying and make him come back to life because that's what I'm picturing her doing right now she is going to be the most pettiest person to imaginable because he let Sasuke have him for a bit now it's her turn and the perfect punishment is living and surviving
Keiraboo401
It’s all good! I love reading your comments and I’m glad you’re using my work to improve yours!