KeithStanley3

Hello all!  Hope you noticed that I have a new work out called "Brighteyes". 
          	It is a quick read so please give it a look over.  All comments are read.
          	

KeithStanley3

I have been very inactive lately and have noticed that I now have new Followers.  To all of you I say welcome and hope your enjoying reading my works.
          I have been working a short that I think will be enjoyable AND the world of Lynn has many more stories to give!.
          God bless and stay safe wherever you are in life.
          

KeithStanley3

Hello and good day to you all.  I know I have not been very active lately but I did get some time to pop out a short.  Please give it a read and let me know how it made you feel.
          I'm working on Walking Mage now but time and brain power are not on my side, lol.
          Take care and God bless!!

Starbucks_Cappuccino

Hey could you maybe read my book The Quarterback's Girl and vote and comment then I can do the same for your book !!Xx I could read your book walking Mage if  looks aweosme 

KeithStanley3

@Starbucks_Cappuccino I'm....ah...that is....ok.  Just an issue, I'm not a huge fan of vote for vote for votes sake, as it were.  If you like my work, you like it!  If not, do not vote please.  Makes my ego go all wonky.  I did look you up, and your current work.  Teen drama not my thing, but story is solid and you have less grammar  mistakes than I do, haha!  Will try, can you try me?
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xeniadageekqueen

I like walking mage but there are some noticeable grammatical errors and mistakes, my thoughts are you could have written a prologue explaining what the long walk is for and about because its not really clear 

KeithStanley3

@ShandeeRoxx, thanks for that.  I did redo it once and may again.  I tend to explain as I go, lacing into the story.  I'm terrible at intros, but learning.
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