Keithxjames4ever

Hey sorry if I couldn't update a another chapter. Im so busy that i cant have time to do my story. I will try my best as i can to post more 

Azusa-san06

Hi QwQ thanks for adding my story to ur reading list ! ^W^

Keithxjames4ever

@Azusa-san06 so am I but I hope u can keep going on the story--·--
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Azusa-san06

@Keithxjames4ever  U//w/U im flattered, thank yuu. I'm just a diehard #Kakairu fan so thts y T///T hihih
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Keithxjames4ever

@Azusa-san06 np but I love the way u made the story -^-
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s715116

Um, have u read "I love you Keith' bc (and I'm not trying to make accusations) some of these parts sound very similar to my earlier chapters and have almost the exact same text

Keithxjames4ever

@s715116 ok I will and thanks u for the tips
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s715116

Ok,  just please try not to from now on. (Maybe compare the 2 before posting?) The story is looking really good. But if ur having trouble with the story, maybe try diving more into your take on the characters and their relationship, analyzing your thoughts, and trying to construct a majority of the parts mentally before trying to write it. That usually works 4 me.  But it's looking great so far 
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