I am aware that in my third chapter I have some typos so I apologize, but then again the third chapter is a lot longer then the others so it would take more time to go through the story and pick out each and every typo. Also in the story she didn't have the skis or ski boots on, when she ran off, I promise I would have mentioned that in the story, it was also a trick competition for those wondering. just needed to clear up some confusion that anyone had because someone did address me with some questions, so I thought I would answer them. I also apologize for the lack of commas and and periods again I would have to got through again and pick out good sentence stopping points. KEEP IN MIND!! I am a little new at this so constructive criticism and questions on the story will help me learn what you guys enjoy and stuff. I am going to post another part of "Looking For The Lost" on Saturday. Thank you for reading!!
