KelseyLynann

YES a new chapter of AotS is out! Please go check it out (: thanks so much for your patience and please let me know your thoughts! 
          	
          	As you know I'm taking it in a new direction so I would love some feedback, please enjoy <3

irritating-goblin

@AnnabelleAsh ME TOO i wanted to reread it after a year but it was taken down :(
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AnnabelleAsh

@KelseyLynann what happened to the story? Went to read and was gone?
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KelseyLynann

@Roseandfun thank you so much!! You don't know how much that means to me! : , D
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-InkCursed-

Hey will you ever start writing again? Or should I remove your book? Thank you and have a great day! :)

KelseyLynann

@InkCursed_7 no problem (: and thank you!
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-InkCursed-

Thanks for replying!! Sorry to here it but hope your happy! 
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KelseyLynann

@InkCursed_7 I would go ahead and remove it! Unfortunately I don't think I will be continuing it. Thank you so much though!
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KelseyLynann

YES a new chapter of AotS is out! Please go check it out (: thanks so much for your patience and please let me know your thoughts! 
          
          As you know I'm taking it in a new direction so I would love some feedback, please enjoy <3

irritating-goblin

@AnnabelleAsh ME TOO i wanted to reread it after a year but it was taken down :(
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AnnabelleAsh

@KelseyLynann what happened to the story? Went to read and was gone?
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KelseyLynann

@Roseandfun thank you so much!! You don't know how much that means to me! : , D
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KelseyLynann

IM BACK???
          
          yes my dear followers, there is a new chapter up and I highly suggest you read it (: even if you've read it before because it id VERY DIFFERENT from the old ch 33!!! Just trust me on this!!!

Roseandfun

That chapter is absolutely amazing 100/10 
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Thelma_Louise

Came here following your book post, requesting people not to read your book until you edit it for fear of disappointment. I just want to let you know you can unpublish the book, keep the votes and comments you have, and only publish the chapters you have edited. I have saved the book regardless, and I can wait to read when you have finishes editing. I hate editing, it's so daunting and tedious. 

KelseyLynann

@Thelma_Louise thank you for letting me know! in the past, if i unpublished it erased everything, so im glad that they have changed it (: you're awesome and i hope when you do decide to give AotS a read you'll enjoy it!
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zesty-

Hi - I hope you are doing well x
          
          I just wanted to say that I think you are a fantastic writer - you have an incredible imagination and I love the vision you had for your story.
          You may be feeling lost and unsure of how to continue, but I want you to know that that is perfectly alright. xxx
          This is your story and you should write it how you want it. Not matter how long it takes or if you decide to go back and change everything about it. 
          You're not obligated to rush it or post chapters just because people are reading it and want to see how it progresses.
          
          That being said, I think it's an amazing story - I was up until 2am this morning enraptured with it. The storyline was fantastic and you set a nice pace for it (until it slowed down quite drastically after her death) - I loved how connected I felt to the characters at the beginning and how you portrayed these characters as well. I'd really love to see where the relationship goes and how those two will save the werewolf population. 
          
          I really hope you continue to write once you yourself have overcome your own worries and doubts because this is a special story.
          
          Thank you for sharing your brilliant imagination with us and delivering this piece of art. 
          
          Take care and be safe x
          
          P. S I really enjoyed your little notes at the end of each chapter and I especially enjoyed seeing your pets and reading their little backgrounds. I'm waiting patiently to see your kitten though ☺️☺️☺️
          
          Much love
          Erin x

KelseyLynann

@zesty- I also feel the same way about the leaving for long amounts of time. In truth, it was because I didn't have an idea of how I wanted it to get to where I wanted and it all turned to filler O.O 
            I have started redoing chapters (: I'm copying and pasting the redo entirety into the chp so that might be why it disappeared for a second lol.
            If you have any ideas or anything you would like to see in the coming chapters please dm me (: I'm more than happy to listen to some constructive criticism <3
            
            -Kelsey
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zesty-

@zesty- 
            oops sorry - I see all the chapters are still there. My mistake xx
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zesty-

@KelseyLynann it is my absolute pleasure x - I love to check in with authors of stories I adore and let them know how much I appreciate all their effort.
            I really think you have a great storyline going, it just needs some refining and planning.
            I really enjoyed Elias' point of view - no matter how sporadic. I love getting the side of the male in the story occasionally. ☺️
            
            From a reader's point of view - I think the story had a bit too much disappearing/leaving for months on end. And I thought Vera's POVs were a little bit unnecessary. But in all totality, it is still your story and you can continue how you'd like, I just thought you might like some feedback. x☺️
            
            I see you've removed some of the chapters and it looks like you'll be starting again, so I just want to say that if that is the case, I'll happily follow along all the new updated chapter this time round with you. x
            
            I really can't wait to see what you do differently and how you'll surprise us devoted readers. 
            
            Much love
            Erin x
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KelseyLynann

I have been trying to give myself some writing inspiration by writing some short stories. I would love to have some reviewers to see if they like it. Its a little more mature than AotS, which is what I'm trying to get in the groove of for new chapters ill add to it later. If any of my wonderful followers would like to skim about 30 pages of it please dm me and I'll share it to you through Google docs (:

IRDGAF12

 Hey do you know how long it will take you to edit the whole book because I would like to read it once it has been completed, don't worry about rushing I don't mind waiting I'm just wondering.

IRDGAF12

@KelseyLynann  Thank you for answering and no worries, I was just wording if you had a rough timeline and that satisfied my curiosity.
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KelseyLynann

@IRDGAF12 I'm honestly unsure :/ im starting college in a week and hope to begin editing/rewriting stuff during my work period everyday. Maybe I can begin with new chapters at the beginning of next year at the latest. It sounds like a long time i know,but I dont know how busy my classes will be this semester or my motivation. Thank you for asking though! (:
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