Hey lovely. I’ve just published a new story titled “The Ravager” and I would really appreciate it if you could check it out and tell me what u think. Thank you :)
Hey! I was wondering if you could read a book of mine and help support me as a fellow writer! Its called 'The Bad Boys Deal'. This is the first book I am sticking with so please help me! Thanks!
https://my.w.tt/skDlvudAqO
It’s pretty cool for a first book. I think you could really get somewhere with it - just be careful not to be under-descriptive and don’t tell the story too fast. Every writer is guilty of it, and I know it’s your first story so just take it from me. Drag the story out, give people those cliffhangers. It draws them in. If you check out my book “Drift” (shameless self-plug) you’ll see that it takes my two protagonists freaking 26 chapters or something to even kiss. Please do check it out! ❤️
@Kelseyal I'm glad that you enjoyed it! Thank you so much for the kind words! :D
I can't wait to go back and edit it. I plan to add at least another 20k words. So there will definitely be scenes you haven't seen before to hopefully make it a bit more dramatic and maybe even a little darker.
No worries! I found your book “After The Bees” really interesting. Like, the ending astonished me. I love the downward spiral of the MC. Love your work ☺️
Hi there,
Thank you so much for following i really appreciate it. I hope you enjoy either Cake Toppers Or Aqua Waters. Please let me know if you ever need anything, or would just like to chat. I'm always around. :)
Happy Wattpading,
- Brittani