I'm going to have to post this in two parts, but I need yall's opinion on my writing now. I'm still on WoF, dunno if anyone still likes it around here, but yeah.
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“Moonwatcher! Remember to be careful, and reminder that your friends can always come visit me!” Secretkeeper yelled from the kitchen. Her eyes were dulled, but she looked fond of her daughter heading outwards.
“I’ll keep that in mind!” Moonwatcher yelled back, struggling to keep her laughter hidden. They were going to chase a storm! And her friends would come back after, and eat dinner like a damn buffet at Moon’s place. As long as Winter kept everything correct, and nothing went wrong, at least.
The dragonet headed outwards, due west, meeting Qibli, Winter, Kinkajou, Carnelian, Turtle and her father, Nova. The group was ready, setting up and arranging people who would carry what. Moonwatcher would carry the panels, Qibli would carry the bin of sulfur iodine, Kinkajou bringing the necessary foods and drinks, Turtle bringing the rest of the chemicals, and Nova and Carnelian bringing up the rear.
“Let’s knock this sand out of the air!” Kinkajou yelled.
Morale up, all energized, the dragonets headed for the small storm that was hiding, slowly building up speed. Eventually, at around roughly one thousand-two hundred feet away from the storm, it blew up, winds whipping the wings of each of the dragonets.
“Set up the panels here, we’ll lay the iodine here and make sure it’s in place! We want this thing to be mapped out!” Moonwatcher said, the storm now nine-hundred feet away from the group.
“C’mon! Hurry!” Qibli yelled, the storm was now starting to yank on the group, and it wasn’t helping. Everything was ready. Now they just needed to time it right, or they were going to be sushi.
I'll put part two in the comments of this.