Kenzie_Isom

Hey Kenzie, it's Hailey. If I can, I would like to give you some tips. 
          
          1. Use quotations for people talking.
          2. Don't bunch all the words in one sentence
          3. Choose a plot to go by
          4. Do a backstory chapter so we know who Analee is
          
          Besides that, I think this story has a lot of potential!