KesseiKeo

Hi. I just posted a new game of thrones story "The Hollow Crown". Will someone please let me know if the last part of my first chapter "Seven Devils" is fully all there or if it's cut off?
          	
          	 On my desktop and edit preview, it shows that it's all there but when I preview as a reader, it shows me typos and the last part bring cut off. 

KesseiKeo

Hi. I just posted a new game of thrones story "The Hollow Crown". Will someone please let me know if the last part of my first chapter "Seven Devils" is fully all there or if it's cut off?
          
           On my desktop and edit preview, it shows that it's all there but when I preview as a reader, it shows me typos and the last part bring cut off. 

KesseiKeo

Omg. I know I should've worked on my first story, "Wolves Without Teeth" but I'm a newb.  Between comic con, school, and watching more of Teen Wolf and reading Captain America fanfics,  I'm slow with ideas and updates. lol Damn writers block and my story ideas are all over the place.  Ugh and now I really want another story I've been thinking about.  I really want to write one of those  fanfics where Tony Stark has a kid, but I'm stuck on choosing the face claim. I love Holland Roden but I also love Elizabeth Gillies and I've been wanting either one as a face claim and it's driving me insane over who I want to use for this story before I even proceed to jot down the rest of the ideas.  Don't hate me if I end with two more stories just to satisfy a reason to use  both face claims in different scenarios. lol  Ugh I l love Holland and Liz and I just can't choose. I'm stuck.

EmeraldIsleEyes

@KesseiKeo You're very welcome. And feel free to use the phrase wherever you think it should go! I'm looking forward to seeing what you come up with in the future. 
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KesseiKeo

@EmeraldIsleEyes Thank you so much for your help!! This really helped me to just put my ideas out there even if they're still works in progress. lol I wrote one down using Elizabeth in mind, haven't published it yet as a one shot, but it's helped me to think of an actual story with her as Stark's kid. :) And I love that phrase "a sharp wit and even sharper eyeliner", may I please use that for in my future story?  It's so clever and so totally Tony's kid.  Thank you for checking out my story, "Wolves Without Teeth." I'm still working on that. I'm having trouble with working out the dialogue so it's taking longer to publish a chapter I'm satisfied with. I'm fickle with when I want to set my story in, whether during Avengers or maybe after or some brief time before Winter Soldier.  lol And it's perfectly fine that you haven't watched Teen Wolf. lol  This story won't touch much on Teen Wolf events or hardly, it'll mostly be center on MCU and those events. I think the only teen wolf thing I'll touch upon is just Lydia's supernatural background and/or possible flashbacks with her friends but those will be explained. This will solely follow MCU. lol I think  I might overwhelm myself if I tried to cross those storylines (Teen Wolf has a lot going on at once lol) so I'm mostly sticking to MCU storylines and adding my favorite characters. :)  Although your advice did help me to start a Teen Wolf story because my gut really wanted to use Eva Green as a character claim and I ended up actually putting my story "Playing With Fire" out there. lol  So thank you for the motivation !
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EmeraldIsleEyes

@KesseiKeo Hey! Just saw this and thought I might perhaps weigh in. (Unless of course you weren't looking for input, in which case just ignore this.) Out of the two, I am personally more inclined to choose Elizabeth Gillies, because I feel she has more of a "Stark" feel to her. No insult to the lovely Miss Roden of course, it's just that when I think of Tony's daughter I think of "a sharp wit and even sharper eyeliner," to coin a phrase, and Elizabeth embodies that quite well. Best of luck to you on your decision, or even better if you choose to write both! The secret to combating writer's block is to never actually stop writing, whether it's reverting to something totally different or even if you don't actually write stuff down but simply go over scenarios in your head! Or, at least, that's my trick. By the way, I just got a chance to check out "Wolves Without Teeth," which I really liked, except for the fact that I know nothing about Teen Wolf as I've never watched the show... *embarrassed cough* I just thought your story was interesting and so I checked it out. I liked your writing style, and your playlist at the beginning, a lot. :) Anyway, best of luck in the future and your continued writings. As for this choice, go with your gut! If you feel the need to write both of their stories, do it! 
            -Many thanks, EmeraldIsleEyes.
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SterlingSilverRose

@KesseiKeo  Thanks for all the votes on "Revolution"! It means a lot!

KesseiKeo

@SterlingSilverRose Your welcome! It's really good so far and very interesting! Please update more soon! Ah I really like Clara and part of me hopes this would be a Steve shipping. lol ;)  But my interest is so peaked at the mention of her running into Bucky as winter soldier.
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