Kevila_KM

I'm editing "Let the Mind Control the Pen". I suggest you check #9 again, for the previous one was a confused messy nothing. I changed it into a poem on forgiveness, it's a dark one, though.
          	
          	https://my.w.tt/L0UWcagHg6

Burhanthe7

Burhanthe7

@Burhanthe7 thanks for the advice.❤️. APPRECIATED
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Kevila_KM

@Burhanthe7 I checked it out. The story appears interesting and all, but I believe you should review your punctuation and presentation, to attract more readers. Just saying, don't take it the wrong way. I'll check more when I've time, since I've only tried the first two chapters. Good luck for the book! And if you've any interest in poems, advices and quotes, give my book LMCP a try.
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Kevila_KM

I've finally updated after months. Let's all try to be productive during the lockdown. Be positive and stay safe. Don't take unnecessary risks.
          
          Check out the new update and if you haven't tried the collection yet, what are you waiting for, do it now.
          
          https://my.w.tt/A0laqFVs24

careshare

Hey, can you check my book 'Choice' ❤️ 

Kevila_KM

Pour ceux qui comprennent le français, j'ai écrit une petite histoire de noël (un conte) intitulée 'Miracle'. Allez jeter un coup d'oeil quand vous avez le temps. J'espère que ça vous plaira.
          
          https://my.w.tt/LfZYbY9RUS
          
          Je vous souhaite un très joyeux noël.