Kevila_KM

I'm editing "Let the Mind Control the Pen". I suggest you check #9 again, for the previous one was a confused messy nothing. I changed it into a poem on forgiveness, it's a dark one, though.
          	
          	https://my.w.tt/L0UWcagHg6

Burhanthe7

Burhanthe7

@Burhanthe7 thanks for the advice.❤️. APPRECIATED
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Kevila_KM

@Burhanthe7 I checked it out. The story appears interesting and all, but I believe you should review your punctuation and presentation, to attract more readers. Just saying, don't take it the wrong way. I'll check more when I've time, since I've only tried the first two chapters. Good luck for the book! And if you've any interest in poems, advices and quotes, give my book LMCP a try.
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maggotnaxel

Hey haven't seen you in a long time. Do you want to join my WritingMap? 

maggotnaxel

I Created it.
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maggotnaxel

It's when lots of wattpad writers make a a account and host it as a Writing map which lots, of writers, make books on that one account. 
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Luna_Luvna

Oh god!!
          Just HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO ME!!
          HOW COULD YOU BETRAY ME!!
          WHAT DID I EVER DO TO YOU TO DESERVE THIS!?!
          THE WOUND YOUR BETRAYAL LEFT ON MY HEART WILL SCAR HARD!
          I WILL NEVER BE ABLE TO GIVE MY HEART TO ANOTHER PERSON AGAIN!
          I HATE YOU FOREVER

Kevila_KM

@Luna_Luvna What kind of adjectives? Things like - I've a twisted mind, I'm determined, I'm very cunning, I'm sinister... Nope, I didn't forget coz you already know all these and you still didn't run away. Hey, you know I'm very nice, helpful and good when I've to even though my face mostly portrays being an emotionless person.
            
            However, you are wrong for no. 4 coz if you could hate me, you'd have done since long
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Luna_Luvna

@Kevila_KM
            1) of course
            2) No need to
            3) Don't waste your time
            4) Of course i can
            5) I think you forgot to add some adjectives
            6) Maybe
            
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Kevila_KM

@Luna_Luvna Of course, of course!! You are such a drama queen. Should take an appointment with a mental doc for you? Or are you gonna take a ride to la la land? Oh and by the way, you can't hate me. I'm the sweet, innocent and sensible cutie. I'm the perfect bbf! 
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