Kevila_KM

I'm editing "Let the Mind Control the Pen". I suggest you check #9 again, for the previous one was a confused messy nothing. I changed it into a poem on forgiveness, it's a dark one, though.
          	
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Burhanthe7

Burhanthe7

@Burhanthe7 thanks for the advice.❤️. APPRECIATED
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Kevila_KM

@Burhanthe7 I checked it out. The story appears interesting and all, but I believe you should review your punctuation and presentation, to attract more readers. Just saying, don't take it the wrong way. I'll check more when I've time, since I've only tried the first two chapters. Good luck for the book! And if you've any interest in poems, advices and quotes, give my book LMCP a try.
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