KewlDoodSphaget
Genuinely how does tag rankings even work? Like wdym today I'm #1 in 'idk' over 64k other stories?
KewlDoodSphaget
KewlDoodSphaget
Okay so bad news, I have this horrible ache in my neck. And it's interfering with my writing, basketballing and even homework. At this point, if this ache continues for the rest of the week, I'm not sure if I'll have enough time to write because of the amount of work I'd have to catch up with. And it really hurts a lot. Is this karma for giving Muryou a tragic past or smth?
Yolo2i
@KewlDoodSphaget then it's probably from your way of sleep It's gonna take a while to be fixed so don't worry ig Happened to my hand
Shadowofthyself
@KewlDoodSphaget Strain does it, alongside stress. Or a pillow change perhaps. Take a break and evaluate your sleeping posture. Take care most of all.
KewlDoodSphaget
Okay guys, here's the problem. Chapter 10 has been getting mixed reviews just like how I viewed it. Some people say it's peak and other people say it's too early which I can agree on.
Induvidually, I feel like it's a decent chapter. But as a part of the story, it's in a weird place.
So I want you guys to choose. Should I unpublish it?
If I do unpublish it, I'll either publish it again later on in the story with a different start and end to add more buildup.
OR I could make it a prologue and completely remove the start and the end to remove the need of buildup. (This is a lazier way, but I digress.)
If you want me to make a few changes to Muryou's backstory, you can suggestvthem here.
I'll check in on this post from time to time before making a decision.
Shadowofthyself
@KewlDoodSphaget It's definitely not too early, and is very much a decent chapter. I do think it can work with a little polish (if you're up for it) It serves its purpose well. And does tell a story. That being said if you are more comfortable with republishing it at a later date with some improvements, go for it. That could be a good thing. I prefer the first chapter as a prologue, so this doesn't seem fit for that at all. For my suggestions to his backstory, I would prefer Sel and Minoru not being genuine friends to Muryou than being terminated, that could be an excellent way to introduce Muryou having trust/attachment issues. That way Muryou doesn't also have to go on the whole avenge his friends and kill the villainous owner mission, and it doesn't have to be too grim.
KewlDoodSphaget
Okay, Update.
No, Squirtle didn't kill me, I'm still alive... I thunk.
Anyways, as for why I haven't been updating... Imma be real, I've been playing Star Rail.
Nope, I'm not joking, I wish I was.
Now normally this wouldn't be a problem. Honkai Star Rail would'nt take most of my time.
But I'm broke... And Castorice's banner is leaving in 10 days... So I'm gonna have to put in some effort.
[I'm literally laughing and crying while typing ts. Anyways, I discovered a really nice fanmade Chainsaw Man song, 'Bang Bang Bang' by BBPanzu. Ya'll should check it ]
Anyways, the next chapter is at 1.5k words, I won't wait for 10 days to release it. I'll try not to forget I have a wattpad acc next time.
Alright, peace out. [I'm really sorry for my long absence, I assure you it will happen again.]
Shadowofthyself
7/10 for me. A bit cyclic and energetic for my taste. Though I love and think the animation is so cool !
KewlDoodSphaget
@Shadowofthyself Oh well, we all have our tastes. What is your type of song in the best way you can describe it?
KewlDoodSphaget
Next week are mid term exams. I'll probably take a break from writing until my summer vacation.
KewlDoodSphaget
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I'm sick... Fuck.
KewlDoodSphaget
Alright, chapter 6 of 'The One They Rely On' is 1000 words into production. But major issue: I'm going on a trip this weekend.
Now why is this a problem? Well I can't just haul off my pc with me.
This also means that if I were to even be ABLE to find time to write, I'd have to do it without listening to my favorite songs (I.e. Love me, Pink Blue, One of the girls, etc.)
So wish me luck guys, let's hope this trip will be worth it.
One thing's for certain, I prolly won't be publishing the next chapter soon. I'm planning it to be more than 3000 words. (Maybe, don't quote me on that.)
First ever announcement and It's bad news. Anyways, peace out and don't forget your Cool Dude Sphagetti. (I'm misspelling Spaghetti on purpose.)
