KeyAsher

I'm back! I've been rereading 'Philza' over the Christmas break and now I'm working on chapter 16 again. If all goes well, it will be out by the end of the week! If you happen to be reading this, thank you for reading my book. I hope you're enjoying it so far, and thank you for your patience while I was at college! 

KeyAsher

I'm back! I've been rereading 'Philza' over the Christmas break and now I'm working on chapter 16 again. If all goes well, it will be out by the end of the week! If you happen to be reading this, thank you for reading my book. I hope you're enjoying it so far, and thank you for your patience while I was at college! 

KeyAsher

I know I've only used third person limited up until this point, but i think this story could benefit from a different pov once in a while. You have to read from their perspective to really understand the Netherkin. They aren't heartless beings, void of emotion, always right, or always good. They are people, and  therefore they have weaknesses. It's important to me that their own story gets some spotlight.

KeyAsher

Ooooooh, I am so excited for chapter 15! This glimpse into the culture of the Kha'rhui is very interesting. A nice break from Philza's limited perspective on things, we get to see how the Rhui of Ne'khahchatur think and veiw the world through their eyes.