KeyAsher

I think 'Philza' is going to be a lot longer than I originally intended.... Curse my outlining, this story will never end!

KeyAsher

I know I've only used third person limited up until this point, but i think this story could benefit from a different pov once in a while. You have to read from their perspective to really understand the Netherkin. They aren't heartless beings, void of emotion, always right, or always good. They are people, and  therefore they have weaknesses. It's important to me that their own story gets some spotlight.

KeyAsher

Ooooooh, I am so excited for chapter 15! This glimpse into the culture of the Kha'rhui is very interesting. A nice break from Philza's limited perspective on things, we get to see how the Rhui of Ne'khahchatur think and veiw the world through their eyes.

KeyAsher

'Philza' is about an avian who survived the Great War in the seventh century, whose immortality is not such a blessing.
          He must escape the hunters after his wings, travel far and alone to his first home, and learn to be compassionate when his friend is reincarnated as a three year old piglin.
          
          Follow him on his journey to find purpose again, and learn about the Sleepy Bois before the Dream SMP.