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Chapter 21 out now!

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@Estrella_juana sure! I'd love to hear your thoughts 
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@Estrella_juana you just did. What's up?
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So I'm writing the next chapter and I'm not sure what I should do for a certain part of it... So I have a question for the Minecraft players.
          
          Do you think that a Nether portal is lit by sparks, or by a real flame?
          
          This unexpectedly matters a lot. Please let me know what you think!

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@Autumn_star2448 sorry.. I just realized I read your comment wrong and my reply sounded weird lol
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@KeyAsher I'm glad I could help!
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KeyAsher

Chapter 20 out now! Nearly 5000 words and we're almost out of the Antarctic! I also put a picture at the top that I found somewhere a while back (credit to whoever drew that it's beautiful), which is what I used as a reference for the description of the Nether people. Hope you enjoy!

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I'm back! I've been rereading 'Philza' over the Christmas break and now I'm working on chapter 16 again. If all goes well, it will be out by the end of the week! If you happen to be reading this, thank you for reading my book. I hope you're enjoying it so far, and thank you for your patience while I was at college! 

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I know I've only used third person limited up until this point, but i think this story could benefit from a different pov once in a while. You have to read from their perspective to really understand the Netherkin. They aren't heartless beings, void of emotion, always right, or always good. They are people, and  therefore they have weaknesses. It's important to me that their own story gets some spotlight.

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Ooooooh, I am so excited for chapter 15! This glimpse into the culture of the Kha'rhui is very interesting. A nice break from Philza's limited perspective on things, we get to see how the Rhui of Ne'khahchatur think and veiw the world through their eyes.