@KeyStorm
Do people actually fw my story? I see a bunch of people trying to talk on Discord so they can help "promote my story." Like damn, just read the whole thing; that's my advertising.so to the 3 people who actually read my ish vote on it an keep reading.
V4V?
Hi there, this is Olivia Worre with Dermaseli. I’m on a team that’s been reviewing Wattpad stories in your genre. Over the last three months we’ve flagged a few new patterns, and two of them stood out when I saw your latest story. I’d like to run a quick question by you — since you’re the only one who can answer it. You can reply here or email me at lawalwrs@gmail.com
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@OlivaWorre_ Took your advice into account. ?The proulge and first two chapters have been properly rewitten with later nuance. I look forward to your reactions!
@KeyStorm What really stood out to me was how you’re juggling all these voices — Rick’s sarcasm, the Doctor’s playfulness, Reed’s clinical tone — and still keeping the momentum moving. It already feels like a crossover event. For the opening, here are two “mini-hook” ideas you could try: Drop in a small unresolved question right in the very first beat — something that hints there’s more at stake than just a cool meet-up. Even a subtle “why now?” could plant a seed that keeps readers flipping. Tighten the first couple of paragraphs so we’re anchored in the void faster — almost like snapping the camera lens into focus before the characters start talking. If you’d like, I can mock up a quick rewrite of your very first few lines so you can see how that mini-hook could work in your own style. That way the opening lands with the same energy your later scenes have.
Is it crazy that I miss school. Like im just waiting for summer to be over atp
My first ever story on this app.
https://www.wattpad.com/story/397517941