KhamD

Can you read my story’s and tell me how I’m doing so far, I’m open to advice as I’m new in posting my story’s. 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/347016645?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details&wp_uname=Asha-Cooper&wp_originator=6M9t3bOa4xK%2B5xq4jMhU%2BNoMbg2M2CJhaQBIkFu8XcvDaEMSkR3IzmQ5DV7tAPZNOFIGjXkuTzZiV6io0qSh%2B0LyQAp3dsjVjybt9rPAQNhtn8%2F7tNholMwPu71kqAd%2F