I like the stories you've made but hoping for revisions. I mean there are parts that are rushed and others that need more details and connections. =) Just wanna help.
Honestly I know it may seem like such a hater thing to do but, that book, 'Million Dollar Bills', it's rush and doesn't go deep into anything. The novel is just... But that's okay. Just try better next time. Again, sorry is this seems annoying and like destructive critique.
I just gone through the story "million dollar bills". It's nice but kind of rushed with everything. What about Beth?? And I still couldn't get the title of the story! Sorry if I hurt u. I'll b waiting for the reply. Thank you.
Hello there just finished your book Million Dollar Bills and I fell in love with it it's really good it would be great if you make a book similar to it
Hi
So i don't mean so sound mean or anything but why on earth did you still let Addison and Marco end up together? It makes no sence,i can't belive she is that stupid to just forgive him... I just feel like killing Marco...
I like you book but it just seriosly had a stupid eneding!!!
I love your way of writing and the story but the ending,it just :@
Sorry if i sound mean tho,i just felt the need of telling you.