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couldn't sleep so I wrote :D happy 100th chapter!!!
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guys... I have a diabolical idea. MAUHAHAHAHAH
notelsie123
Question could we have a mini JJ instead of Sarah pregnant and she finds out when they search for JJ and Sarah kie find her also if ur doing jjs death could u do a alternative ending please aswell also if Gracie does get pregnant can u do where when she goes over bored John b saves her
Kiki_Mars
@notelsie123 I'm not sure about a pregnancy plot line for Grace because I know a lot of readers don't enjoy pregnancy stories. But I was also thinking about doing something like that. Also the ending is going to be different from how it is in the show (I won't specify how). And Grace and JJ's storyline will involve something like that, I'm pretty sure. Its hard to say right now, because I sort of come up with ideas as I go along, but I'll definitely consider it :D
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3 in a row? she's gone crazy! (Next chapter is up :D)
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Thank you for 400K reads! Love y'all! P4L :D
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Second chapter in two days?! Who am I? Anyway, go enjoy (and suffer a little). This one is also fairly long :D
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JUST CAUSE YOU LEAVE LIKE ONE DOESN'T MAKE YOU A MAN ️️️
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Okay so, please, please, answer this... Imma introduce Tara (Kie's girlfriend) in the next chapter. How involved in the story do y'all think I should make her? Right now the plan is to sorta have her as a background character, showing up as much as like, Heyward or like Topper and co do. But do y'all want more? I know it's sorta hard to say since theres not much to go off of yet, but just like general opinions would be fantastic :D
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@honeyyalmond after writing this chapter, I think you're right. It's really difficult to add in dialogue for one oc, never mind another. I think it depends on the series tho, outer banks dialogue is really quick and snappy, so adding in more characters to the friend group really changes the dynamic. It was fun to write for Tara but I think I'll probably stick to just Grace. Thanks for the love and feedback :D
honeyyalmond
honestly for me it’s kind of like hit or miss with adding more ocs into the main group, just based on other fics i’ve read. like sometimes it feels really natural and like it goes with the original plot really well-and other times it feels a bit forced and kind of overwhelming. but honestly your writing is amazing and i think you’d do a really good job with bringing her into the plot either way!! <3
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Next chapter is up!!! This one's longer to make up for how short the last one is :D
bows_0
New chap when? (Are you gonna kill off JJ?)
