Hello, good morning/afternoon/evening to you. My name is TaelxD, and I hope I'm not bothering you. The reason I'm writing is that I'd like to ask if you could critique my fanfic, "Pokémon: The First Step Through Kanto." It's a reinterpretation of the Pokémon world using all the official media of the saga, such as the anime, video games, manga, and novels by Takeshi Shudo, but this time using Red, who was based on his counterpart from the Pokémon Special manga. Of course, I've taken my own creative liberties to give the story a unique touch. If you're not interested, please disregard this. If you are interested, you can read it here: https://www.wattpad.com/story/371717523?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=NewTaelxD
That's all from me. I love your Pokémon: Love and War fanfic; keep it up!