KilluaZoldyck771

Im planing on making a ' ocs book' and a ' my art book '
          	Do I 
          	Or 
          	dont I

DeathWing39

Hello this is Deathwing39. Thank you for following me also I really like your Natsu x reader, so some advice it would make the story lot better of switching through different point of views. So when the reader, and her friends were down there that way we know how everyone was feeling. Like Natsu needing the reader and like mad seeing her with another Male, also like you showed how the reader was feeling making me really like the story. But you don't have to do any of that it is just something that you might want to try because that story is great. And you made this story good.

KilluaZoldyck771

@DeathWing39 
            Thx ill give it though
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