karinawrts
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Hey, sorry to post here without permission. This is my first story, I would love to get your feedback. Your support will be much appreciated.
Thank you❤
https://www.wattpad.com/story/402662675?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=karinawrts
KimNgco
@ karinawrts hey
First of all, I don't mind that, I enjoy reading new stories, so you're welcome to post any of your stories in here
Second, about the story, I happy to say that you have all my support, love, appreciation and all the cheers that I can think of. Cause first, you got an extra credit for the fact that it has cute animal cubs ( my top 5 favorite reading themes, also it's hard to get good one like this ), and second is that the story got a nice development for the character, from the storming weather to the elusive view of the lotus lake, all of which create quite a adventurous world for the reader to explore.
Finally, I have two small suggestions for the story, these two are just suggestions so you don't have to follow it if you don't want to. First up, I hope that the story can focus more on the sweet moments with the adorable cubs than the adults drama. Second, I hope that our female lead don't have any connections or encounters with people from the royalty and nobility, cause believe when I say that I have read enough to understand that any connections and encounters with them alway lead to unnecessary lame issues that normally lead up to more than 20 chapters ( trust me, you don't want to know how it goes).
Overall I love and enjoy reading your story and you are welcome to post any stories of your or needing someone to talk to then I alway all ears. Thank you for your amazing story. ❤️❤️❤️
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