KimiOverYourFavs

I'm kinda disappointed that no one gave me advice on writing on my little one shot tbh ;-; All I wanted was to know if it sounded like trash which it probably did or if I misspelled anything/ or that it sounds to bland and dry, Or even advice on how my writing style should be like

KimiOverYourFavs

I'm kinda disappointed that no one gave me advice on writing on my little one shot tbh ;-; All I wanted was to know if it sounded like trash which it probably did or if I misspelled anything/ or that it sounds to bland and dry, Or even advice on how my writing style should be like