@MarkEverest64 Nah I'm hardly getting any reads :( The last couple of chapters have 7 ! And only 1 vote and 0 comments. The earlier chapters had more reads but I think a lot of them were duplicates - people loading it multiple times or something. And a lot of them were your friends. Plus don't forget I have a LOT OF CHAPTERS ;)
Anyway I have an idea you could make your writing a bit easier to digest maybe, without losing the excitement - I'll see if I can find something helpful to say about that. And I keep tinkering with mine trying to improve things so when you've passed all your exams with distinctions you could maybe do the same for me?