Spacermatrix

Not a bad start, try to go more into depth with your characters.

KindMj

@Sneakerheadmaster16  how about now had to put a front and make a few little changes with the description
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Spacermatrix

For one, add categories to the story to stand out, this will help you gain more attention from readers and will help you in the rankings. Second, have a format, this can help you with writing the story and it can make the reader feel like they’re watching it from right in front of them. Lastly, get a little loose in the story, while it’s good to have a format for the stories, it can also make your stories bland and stale if you use it many times. Try adding some uniqueness to the different stories so that way it stands out from the rest and if you do all that then you’ll be just fine. ✌️
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