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ComedyGold1

Just finished reading Tankery End. Few things I didn't like. First is just the amount of very sussy moments. I mean, if you put male and female teen on an island for a year, it's bound to happen. It got a bit satire as I read through. The part where Edward was taking Maho to pound town just shouldn't be there in the first place. Like for context, the guy hasn't slept for 2 days and the part where she is mentally unstable should not have led them there. Also the scene where Edward shouts that Maho was pregnant was indeed a plot twist, but not in the good way. What about the University Team that was just sitting around? It would've been better if they suddenly had a change of heart and decided to destroy the Gustav Cannon and ultimately end the match. It was good for the first 13 chapters but went on a downward spiral later into the chapters. Maybe it was intentional to simulate how warfare works, from calm and strategic, to undecisive and desperate.
          
          And don't mention Austin being attacked by the same bear twice. Give my guy a break. 

KingDiscord

@ComedyGold1 no worries, thanks for the input.
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ComedyGold1

Don't take it to heart, just my dumb opinion 
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darkknight965

Yo, mind if I use some of your ideas like the island and the battlefront thing for my story?
          
          Its not for now but later, thanks for reading.

KingDiscord

@darkknight965 I don't mind. Plenty of others have used it too so don't be shy.
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Captainrex2177

@KingDiscord can you follow that I already followed yours

KingDiscord

@Captainrex2177 you want me to follow your page, got it.
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Captainrex2177

@KingDiscord I just followed you?
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Hounoku

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KingDiscord

@Hounoku not that kind of discord
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