King_Astral

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seemorawrite

Hi I’m the author of between the redwoods thank u for taking the time to read the story. I was wondering though how do you mean more depth to the characters and details? 

seemorawrite

But I’ll work on it
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seemorawrite

Ok thxs for the feedback I think the more u read the book the more detailed it is
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King_Astral

@Sydneycl2050 More in depth to the characters means not only giving them a backstory but showing thier soul, personality and such. I should feel like I know them after finishing your book.  
            
            By details I mean to be more descriptive. You need to describe the setting and everything regardless of how you feel. It may seem unnecessary but if I don't know where a chracter is, what am I imagining. Books work best when you have a description that helps the imagination work best.
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King_Astral

I apologize for all late replies. I’ve been working on somethings in personal life and dealing with my university. Please understand although all your reviews are important to me, I’m currently working a job as well as you guys during this pandemic as well as being obligated as a full time student.

armani_g_keegan

@King_Astral I hope you're doing well <33 Remember to take care of yourself! :)
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sacredlilac

@King_Astral Everyone should! You've kindly given a heads up. You do your reviews for free and sometimes life gets busy.
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King_Astral

@sacredlilac Thank you for understanding!
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