Kinghero2001

@Kinghero2001 it's all good and while I can see that it's a little rushed in some areas it's fine to me like the Frieza fight for Example you could say it's completely rushed and that way more people should've been able to notice it but that's minor stuff and could really just be the excuse of wanting to get to the main Story which I understand and am hoping it has to do with both Cooler and King Cold and when Salem rolls around Cell as well because it may just be me but I can totally see Cell be like now that I'm born and you've unleashed something beyond your comprehension with the Cells of the Oc and possibly other Z Fighter's like Piccolo and another Saiyan and other people who are actually on our level would be a good idea granted it's your story just thought I'd help you out by throwing out ideas

@goku1428 Soon this is just my first story, I'll update as soon I can.