Kingx2198

Hey my beloved readers I made a mistake and published the next part of God of war deku it's not done yet so I unpublished it but don't worry it's will be out soon I am also done with it 

bibianacalvomouzo8

@Kingx2198 - - IZUKU SPARTA: THE NEW GOD OF WAR - Good luck with chapter 12. You know what would be cool about this? When Izuku and his family, who earned it fair and square, I mean, when our Izuku and his family are in front of UA High School with everyone, even Principal Nexu, the rat, Izuku should tell them what the Goddess of Gifts didn't tell him: the truth about Odin making a deal with her and why he's afraid the prophecy of his death at Izuku's hands will come true. Then Izuku should show them the mark on his arm, and everyone should see the same mark. And then Izuku should tell them everything he's done because of Odin and his fear of the prophecy of his death. And then Izuku should tell them about his exile from the place where he was exiled, what happened in chapter 11, how hard it was for him to get out, and how he was gone for 10,000,000 years and is stronger than... Izuku killed everyone in the place he was before leaving, and Izuku told them that the goddess of gifts had made the worst mistake of their lives and was using them for her own benefit at the cost of their lives so that Odin could win and the prophecy wouldn't be fulfilled. Tell me, will you put this in the new chapter? What's your answer?
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Kingx2198

@bibianacalvomouzo8 I'll think about it and see what I can do 
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bibianacalvomouzo8

@Kingx2198 - IZUKU SPARTA: THE NEW GOD OF WAR - Good luck with chapter 12. You have no idea how much I want to read all the chapters of this novel. What's your answer?
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M0ntgomery_Wr1ter

Hey man I just saw a video that was funny you should see it and it's about Leon
          
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SleepyMonarchTS

What did you ping me for on discord. I was asleep?

Kingx2198

My oc won't be that arrogant like vegeta 
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Kingx2198

Isagi is an egoist and only shows that side to his opponents and people he wants to devour to get stronger and be the best
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photonzero21

Hey kimgx2198 can u make a story about your oc character that basically hate heroes and villains alike and using the power of chaos because chaos is humanity nature like light is good side of humanity and darkness is the evil side of humanity but he balance them out like yin and Yang. don't make your oc character a arrgonant and ego dude because i find those kind of character weak because if the heroes in your stories realize that arrogant and ego make them strong but it just show that they just weak and they should be strong with the power not by arrgonant and ego.

photonzero21

I don't mean to offend u or your story, I just love your story and they are awesome 
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photonzero21

U seen on TV show how arrgonant and ego and selfish villains are like in the hazbin hotel and helluva boss the villains are just like that 
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photonzero21

@photonzero21 but egotist are just selfish and don't care about anything like Vegeta for example he let his pride and ego get him killed and he will never defeat Goku because Goku don't have that and that why Goku is stronger than him and the rest of the z fighter because of his goodness not egotist. Look I love your story but I just want your character to be powerful without arrgonant and ego because that just leaves to their downfall.
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carinaa9

Hey man here is question who will wins is you izuku s redfield vs second body damiel park in ultra instinct mode so who will wins that is my question is 
          

Kingx2198

@carinaa9 Izuku is basically like daniel park in his second body when he goes UI the only difference is that izuku stats are far superior then SB UI Daniel 
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Kingx2198

@carinaa9 My izuku would win off course but he wouldn't win easily since Second body in UI is a machine just like him so he is basically fighting himself since I made them similar but with izuku more stronger and fast then him along with his adapting and adjusting his level this opponent 
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