Hi!
Thank you very much for your feedback. As some of you know, I'm new to this, and you guys are helping me a lot; giving me tips, and pointers.
With that said, I made the decision to keep my chapters under or around 2000 words, so I cut Chapter 2 in two. Sorry for that. Hope the transition is smooth and that this helps! Any feedback is welcome.
Thanks for the support and understanding,
Martin