Hello everyone, I know that I'm spotty with the way I update my work. Also, I know that there are long breaks in between when I do update "Veiled War." I apologize for that. I work random 12hr shifts at Tripler Army Medical Center in Honolulu Hawaii. I don't have very much time to myself with all of the training that the Army demands of me and with my regular shifts at the hospital.
So to everyone who does take the time to read my unfinished work, thank you. Please leave me comments on how I can improve my work. I am always open to suggestions, and if you think there are things that I could change to make characters more appealing (or appalling for that matter) please message me with what you think. I would love to hear what you have to say.