Kira1547

Guess what? I’m back! It feels so good to be back after stressful exams.

textahoy

@Kira1547 @Kira1547 Glad to see you back!
          	  
          	  I'm still getting ideas for my Lion Guard AU; most recently I had a chapter about a new student starting School on the day of the first snowfall of Winter, and Vitani quickly takes a disliking to her so the teacher says, "well, since you're the most vocal about this, why don't you show her around?" and Vitani's basically like, "what?!? Are you kidding me?!?" and I'm also doing Vitani's first meeting with her Lion Guard and Kion gets worried on account of Vitani immediately striking up a friendship with them and also because, "nobody told me about new students; what if they're spies or saboteurs?" [Kion's actually right but all he's got is suspicions at this point]
          	  
          	  I've also started a chapter based off an episode of The Lion Guard now; more specifically "The Travelling Baboon Show" from Season 2 and I'm wondering how closely I should follow the plot of said episode, on account of no Roar of The Elders, and I very much doubt the Pridelanders would let a gang of teenagers go into the Outlands by themselves with a large Army of Scar worshippers roaming around. Oh, yes, and Vitani's presence in the Pridelands and how she reacts to the events as they occur.
          	  
          	  The only possible dialogue I have at the moment is a line from Vitani: "The Outlands?!? Seriously?!? Have you guys any idea how dangerous that place is, or what'll happen if Zira finds you? You're the Mayor's Son! She'd kill you in a heartbeat and leave you there for the vultures! You can't seriously be suggesting we go to the Outlands!"
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Mydreamteam3

@Kira1547 So good to have you back
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Kira1547

Guess what? I’m back! It feels so good to be back after stressful exams.

textahoy

@Kira1547 @Kira1547 Glad to see you back!
            
            I'm still getting ideas for my Lion Guard AU; most recently I had a chapter about a new student starting School on the day of the first snowfall of Winter, and Vitani quickly takes a disliking to her so the teacher says, "well, since you're the most vocal about this, why don't you show her around?" and Vitani's basically like, "what?!? Are you kidding me?!?" and I'm also doing Vitani's first meeting with her Lion Guard and Kion gets worried on account of Vitani immediately striking up a friendship with them and also because, "nobody told me about new students; what if they're spies or saboteurs?" [Kion's actually right but all he's got is suspicions at this point]
            
            I've also started a chapter based off an episode of The Lion Guard now; more specifically "The Travelling Baboon Show" from Season 2 and I'm wondering how closely I should follow the plot of said episode, on account of no Roar of The Elders, and I very much doubt the Pridelanders would let a gang of teenagers go into the Outlands by themselves with a large Army of Scar worshippers roaming around. Oh, yes, and Vitani's presence in the Pridelands and how she reacts to the events as they occur.
            
            The only possible dialogue I have at the moment is a line from Vitani: "The Outlands?!? Seriously?!? Have you guys any idea how dangerous that place is, or what'll happen if Zira finds you? You're the Mayor's Son! She'd kill you in a heartbeat and leave you there for the vultures! You can't seriously be suggesting we go to the Outlands!"
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Mydreamteam3

@Kira1547 So good to have you back
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textahoy

Here's the only dialogue ideas I currently have between Simba and Kovu:
          
          Simba: Um...Kovu?
          
          Kovu: Yeah?
          
          Simba: There's uh...there's someone here in Pridelands City we need to talk about. Her name's *insert name here,* and she, err...she's Zira's younger sister.
          
          Kovu: *Shocked* Wait, sister? Zira never told me she had a sister!
          
          Simba: Well, she does, and she remained loyal to the Circle Of Life, so I allowed her and her family to stay.
          
          Kovu: She has a family?
          
          Simba: Yes. She has a Son around your age, his name is Kos, and a husband whose name is *insert name here*. They're dying to meet you, Kovu, and have already offered to be your new legal guardians.
          
          Kovu: What? You mean, I'd live here in the Pridelands?
          
          Simba: Yes. You'd be well away from Zira. No more abuse and free to live whatever kind of life you wanted.
          
          Kovu: Um...Simba, that's such a kind offer, but...I must say no.
          
          Simba: What? Why?
          
          Kovu: It's my sister. 
          
          Simba: Sister? I didn't know you had siblings.
          
          Kovu: Her name's Vitani.
          
          Simba: Doesn't that mean "I Am War" in the old language?
          
          Kovu: Yes it does, and she hates it. She prefers being called 'Tani.
          
          Simba: I'm not surprised, what a name to give to your daughter. So, what's up with her?
          
          Kovu: If I leave, Zira will murder her.
          
          Simba: *Shocked* What?
          
          Interesting?

Kira1547

I have exams in 3 days!!! You may not hear me for a while. See you later.
          
          Also, I really need a dialogue between Simba and Kovu, when they bond and it has be something about Kiara.
          
          See you. I'll miss this app (Even though I'll just be gone for a week.)

textahoy

@Kira1547 That's all right, I'll miss you too ~ your work is amazing.
            
            I also could use a hand with dialogue between Kion and Vitani, so if you don't mind giving me a hand [or any other limb you care to mention] with it, please let me know.
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Kira1547

Hi. You're probably wondering why I haven't updated my book yet. Well I'm kind of stuck. But I promise I'll updated as soon as I figured it all out. Thank you.

textahoy

@Kira1547 Not to worry, I'm in a similar position with my story, both because of ongoing problems involving my parents and incidents which occured at my friend's farm.
            
            That and I'm still missing some dialogue between Vitani and Kion for the next chapter, which is stopping me from publishing said chapter.
            
            Do you have any more ideas for the scene you wanted me to do in which Kion saves Vitani and tells her she shouldn't try to go to places where she's likely to get attacked as it's not safe for a 'girl like her' and Vitani responds, "Excuse me, I am no damsel in distress!"
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Mydreamteam3

@Kira1547 Take all the time you need.
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textahoy

I've just given you a follow. :-)
          
          I'm delighted that you put my book in your 'nicely done' list. I hope you take the time to have a read of the latest chapter when it's ready to be uploaded.

textahoy

@Kira1547 I'm currently working on a scene in which Kion and Vitani meet her bullies for the first time and one with Zira remembering her own abusive past.
            
            I've also got a conversation in mind between Kion and Vitani which goes like this:
            
            Vitani: *winces in pain* Kion, what did you do that for? You had no call to punch *insert name here* like that! We were only talking?
            
            Kion: Did he offer you any drugs?
            
            Vitani: Wait, what?
            
            Kion: Vitani, *insert name here* and his friends are drug dealers. The LC and I caught them trying to sell drugs on the School campus a while back and he's hated us ever since.
            
            *Vitani is stunned into silence*
            
            Kion: I'm sorry I hit you, 'Tani, but I just want you to promise me you'll stay away from him, ok? Trust me on this, he's dangerous and I don't want you getting involved in things like that. Principal Rafiki ordered me to keep you safe and that's what I'm going to do.
            
            If you're wondering what happens next, Vitani continues seeing the other fellow off and on around School and then outside of School too, until one night he puts her into real danger somehow and Kion and his friends have to step in to rescue her.
            
            After she's rescued, Kion is really angry because the other fellow had put his friend at risk and she'd ignored his warnings, and Vitani is ashamed and embarrassed because she knows she needed the extra help on that occasion and because she likes being thought of as tough and has just shown Kion that she has a much more vulnerable side that she hides most of the time.
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Kira1547

@textahoy Can you add a scene where Kion saves Vitani and tells her she shouldn’t try to go to places where she’s likely to get attacked as it’s not safe for a ‘girl like her’ and Vitani is all like “Excuse me, I am no damsel in distress”
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