hello, how are you ? i had read your story "Dead letter office , parish mail #1 " and it was stunning , i cant get it out of my mind . so i thought using a little of your knowledge might help me , you see i am working on this story right know ,and it is my first , i would like if you can read it --> http://www.wattpad.com/story/38167465-hope , it is surely not as half good as yours but it is a starts and i have this dream to write a good book . so i was hoping you will help me by telling what you think and how to improve anything weak in it, it would mean a lot , thank you very much