johndoethemaster

Do you have any suggestions on my story besides the fight scenes?
          
          Looking back, I may have overestimated some of the UnOrdinary cast and underestimated Yu’s ability.

Kiri32900

@johndoethemaster story wise honestly it is going great so far and honestly with yu you can write him however strong you want him to be to better help the story narrative as for the story itself I don’t have any complaints I think your doing a really good job with this story
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