Definitelynotaspyfr

bonjour mon ami it seems your a pretty big fan of Jjk do you actually like the story im making? I want your full opinion as it is my first time writing a story mon ami. Anyways I'll be making the next chapter by tomorrow or when i have the time and also merci d'avoir lu.

Definitelynotaspyfr

@Definitelynotaspyfr 
            merci pour votre avis
            Thank you for your opinion
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KisukeUrahara25

@Definitelynotaspyfr Hello! So far I'm enjoying the story. I'm excited to see how Mahoraga will react to Raiden.
            Now for the review of the story. I personally like it and am excited to see how you will continue it. To me your writing is understandable and enjoyable to read, however english is not my native language so I can't give you thorough review on your writing (but as I mentioned it is understandable to me).
            For your first story it's good. The writing is understandable and the story is easy to undetstand. Keep up the good work
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