@CaitRoseCo no problem, I found your story at the suggestion of Love Bite Obey, I like to follow good writers and your story is great so far, it has the potential to hook a lot of people. There is only one suggestion that I offer and it really isn't about the storyline at all because that story is great and right now one of my top 3 faves out of the 500 books I have in my library lol, the suggestion I have is your chapters are very short and since I greatly enjoy this book, such a short chapter leaves me wanting more otherwise great job so far and I'm excited to see where this story will go. Keep up the great work