Moonstone920

I also have a question...how old are you? If you don't mind me asking 

Moonstone920

@ROSEKORTE I am 13 and female too!!! And don't mind showing that off
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Kittie-Kat

@ROSEKORTE and i am female!
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Kittie-Kat

@ROSEKORTE i am 20. And you?
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Moonstone920

And did u like my book?!

Moonstone920

@ROSEKORTE ya  i can do that. Let me get there and then i will start a conversation 
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Kittie-Kat

@ROSEKORTE when you write how do you feel? How do you write? Do you get into the character's mind as you write? From experience its best to get into the character to be able to execute his or her thoughts. Its just like acting only you are putting the words into script. My advice is that for a first timer it is best to write in the author's point of view. Lets go to private messaging alright?
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Kittie-Kat

@ROSEKORTE Lol.... You'll get back on track soon. Just read over everything(not necessarily but almost)
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Moonstone920

Also like i said if there us anything i should edit or revise please let me know and i will attend to it ASAP. One other thing do u think u can help me? Im in a jam as what the next chapter should be and im open to any thoughts and ideas. THANKS!!!

Moonstone920

@ROSEKORTE AWE!!!!!!!! Thanks! I love that u like my book. Ans thank u for the advice. Im sorry the chapters r too short. I might take ur advice and combine some. I can also try to make them longer. And i will take the opportunity and say yes to ur ideas and thoughts. I am open to any that u have so let them come rolling in!!! If i don't use them either i thought of something else i could use or i forgot so...
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Kittie-Kat

@ROSEKORTE sure! I'd love to help you dear. The story line is great. Its just that your chapters are too short. You could revise them and combine some chapters, not necessarily add up to them. I was just reading but if you need any help and i see anything i can help you with i'd be honored to do so. It takes just any one to write anything into a book but it takes time, passion and a great imaginative, crazy and creative mind to write the perfect book. 
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BlackKnight77

Hey, thanks for following me:)

BlackKnight77

@Kittie-Kat =O oh my jeewzees how did you know her???????! :O
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Kittie-Kat

@BlackKnight77 Melissa sez u r a dim wit.I quote;"its Melissa u dim wit"
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