@ROSEKORTE sure! I'd love to help you dear. The story line is great. Its just that your chapters are too short. You could revise them and combine some chapters, not necessarily add up to them. I was just reading but if you need any help and i see anything i can help you with i'd be honored to do so. It takes just any one to write anything into a book but it takes time, passion and a great imaginative, crazy and creative mind to write the perfect book.