@stellarshere00 Sorry for replying too late (even too late is sounding so :-| according to the date) as I didn't see it earlier . Read all the chapters you have posted till now . Well your story is good and seems interesting, I genuinely liked that the FMC is strong not that haye bichari types , the way you write is nice . What you can improve is -
1. The cover can be improved so that it gives the vibe of story and readers could get attracted.
2.The aesthetics are good but they are kind of messy with too many pictures so if you make a proper collage and include the name in catchy font it will look more better and also you can add a dialogue to make it look more wow. The aesthetics give a virtual view of the characters and defines their personality so its important that it's on point so readers have that kind of imagination.
3. I have noticed that the character's pov and author's pov all sounds same , if you are writing the character's pov then it should sound that character himself/herself is telling the story. You know what I mean to say.
4. The marriage of Vedika and Ishaan , the reaction of Vedika's family didn't set well with me I don't why but I found it foreign and weird.
5. And also Hindi dialogues can be at times top notch and can also be cringy so write dialogues in hindi when it's a humourous/hilarious scene like the one of Aarav, and scene full of emotions and in those intense situations to have that feel. I will be like chef's kiss .
Well you are already on the track and your story have a plot and its interesting, the story just need a little bit of improvement and you are all set to go. I would love read the upcoming chapters. I hope you find my opinions helpful not hateful in any way.
All the best author <3
